Sunday, September 5, 2010

Poem(3) Composed individually based on a story of Catherine Lim's Little Ironies







Lottery

Ah Boh, who was my
domestic helper
Loved gambling on Four Digits every week
Though she bet a small amount
Every bet was a bomb which was about to explode

She had an old mother
whose bones were glass which could break any moment
she complains that Ah Boh had a good salary
yet she was not given enough
Since Ah Boh have a good salary
Then where is all the money?

For all her years of being my servant
Despite my countless reminders
of the consequences of gambling
It fell upon deaf ears

She dreamed that she could hit it big one day
So she threw in big stakes
A few small prizes did come her way
But they were used up the next day
As if the money was flying away

One day, her dead husband gave her a sign
that this was the day luck came to her side
and rushed to an accident a street away
But she was in disbelief
When her mother was there
and had died in grief

5 Comments:

Blogger seeminfeng said...

nice rhyme and good poem with lots of poetic device... nice describtive words use in your poem

September 5, 2010 at 6:02 PM  
Blogger Ghost said...

Great Poem

September 5, 2010 at 6:06 PM  
Blogger Muhammad Radi said...

nice rhyme in the poem.i felt that you could have used more poetic devices.but overall, it is still a good poem.

September 5, 2010 at 6:08 PM  
Blogger JunHao said...

Rythmes are fantastic!! Worth-reading!!

September 5, 2010 at 6:12 PM  
Blogger Li Ee Lok x said...

nice poem

September 5, 2010 at 6:15 PM  

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